Mix has serious clarity issues. The clean guitar bit at the start and the drums fit together very nicely. But becomes a mid/bass mess Once the whole thing comes together. Needs a wider spread of frequencies, and more holes for the other bits to fit into. other than that very solid work.
I'd suggest supplementing it with other drum samples. Check out Andy Reilly drum samples. They're really cheap but the Snares/kicks and toms sound great! Audio Samples - ANDY REILLY'S KITS
You can use compression to add snap depending on the way you set the attack/ratio functions. For the noob at compression, I know this is a DnB forum. But seriously check out this forum post here on DoA. Compression 101: the basics - Dogs On Acid It should explain what a compressor...
That's not a reversed snare sound at all, it's not tight enough. That's reverse-reverb. Just reverse a section of your music you want that to have, put reverb on it. Render the reverb down onto the file. Then reverse the file again. the reverb will come BEFORE the snare, not after. Giving...