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I've been messing with some playstyles I haven't quite experimented with before and I was wondering if I could get some thoughts on both my tone and mix. The drums were created with Daniel Berg's s2.0 preset and programmed by me, the rest was written and recorded by me...

Hello Guys, I am trying to get the mix right to this song and need some advice. I know that this is nowhere near being a finished product but I need your guys help on critiquing it. Thank you, Jamison http://soundcloud.com/jamisonplague/intro-1