Comment on my progress

[amberawakening]

I'm working on my first (actual?) song and I'm pretty happy with what I have so far. I was looking for input from other musicians on what they thought of my current progress.

https://soundcloud.com/dave-shindig/desperado

Thanks for reading.

( .zip with .GP5 file of the track)

 

[RevDrucifer]

I'm not quite sure how to comment on that....

A- Is it taking the piss out of Rings Of Saturn? (If so, I love it)

B- Is the intent to actually physically play this at some point?

 

[amberawakening]

I'm not quite sure how to comment on that....

A- Is it taking the piss out of Rings Of Saturn? (If so, I love it)

B- Is the intent to actually physically play this at some point?

It's more or less me taking the piss out of all the music I listen to.

I can play everything, but I am still working on getting everything nice and fluid and on time. (Especially considering I wrote the second measure by mistake while tabbing it out)

 

[Aion]

I only have a little to say and it's just I like this, keep going.

 

[amberawakening]

I only have a little to say and it's just I like this, keep going.

Thank you!

I will keep trying my best, hopefully I can make something of this little tune.

 

[amberawakening]

Here's an update on the track.

I fixed some time signature issues, fixed up the drums a bit and balanced the volume of the midis.

Here's the soundcloud sample - https://soundcloud.com/dave-shindig/save14

Also included will be a .zip of the .gpx file for Guitar Pro.

Thanks!

 

[amberawakening]

Finally got the rough idea of the entire song.

https://soundcloud.com/david-barney-5/desperado-rough

(.zip of the .gpx file.) For guitarpro

 

[octatoan]

Mods, this seems like spam. ^

 

[The Mirror]

Well. It sounds like all that Deathcore/Mathcore/RoS/Moderntechnical stuff.

I'm am absolutely not into that genre as I think it's just note-after-note-wanking-off but if you wanted to achieve a song like the aforementioned you definitely got that right.

 

[Nour Ayasso]

A- Is it taking the piss out of Rings Of Saturn? (If so, I love it)

So if you really want to know my thinking about Comment on your Progress, then i will tell you that i am very Appreciate form your Progress. I want that you improve it as more as possible. So i want wish you a Good Luck.

Hmm the internet is very entertaining

OP it sounded it pretty good! I though the composition aspects were good, I wonder how this would sound on actual instruments. How'd you get your GP5 btw?

 

[PunkyE]

I'm working on my first (actual?) song and I'm pretty happy with what I have so far. I was looking for input from other musicians on what they thought of my current progress.

https://soundcloud.com/dave-shindig/desperado

Thanks for reading.

( .zip with .GP5 file of the track)

Pretty good bro.