Could you critique my mix? (Icarus Lives Intro)

[velopodband]

Hey guys! I'd love it if you could give me some critiques on my mix! I threw this together in about an hour just as a mix test, but I might fully cover the song if I have the time...Anyways, tell me what you think! I think I've gotten Bulb's tone down pretty well, but it's still not quite there.

I posted this mix test on the wrong soundcloud because I'm dumb hehe XD

https://soundcloud.com/officialpulseband/icarus-lives-intro-cover-1

 

[jmeezle]

Sounds pretty good, it would sound even better with the correct opening note of that riff

 

[velopodband]

Sounds pretty good, it would sound even better with the correct opening note of that riff

Yeah I played it wrong I know haha. I was in the wrong tuning as well because I'm too lazy to drop my guitar a half step