Cover of my old band's song - (Metalcore, 8 String, Djent free)

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I've done this cover recently, this is my first band's song called "Dying in My Arms". Insrumentals was written in 2008 by me, and our vocalist came up with lyrics. Recently I've decided to make this sort of tribute video because this band and this song is very special for me. Also I've done all the vocal parts and spiced up the original solo
I would really appreciate some feedback onc this song and mix

Sacrum - Dying in My Arms
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Xjpz1Wwf01k