Here are a couple of songs that I've written and sporadically modified over the past few years, but I realize that my opinion alone on the songwriting doesn't mean much. Unfortunately these aren't actual recordings, but audio outputs from the guitar pro tabs I wrote for the songs.
Before committing to recording these, I really need some external feedback (only on the songwriting) that'll help me know the flaws and improve upon my songwriting in general. I apologize in advance if guitar pro audio outputs aren't allowed, or if this subforum isn't the right one to post feedback threads.
I'd appreciate some honest feedback, especially about those parts which don't sound good. Of course, it would be good to hear what parts sound good according to you as well, and this way I can form an idea of what I did wrong/right.
https://soundcloud.com/kulhari_shirish/sets/outset_2016
(And just in case, here are the gp tabs: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-2nHF8a0j3XNXB6Ry1ZSXNVNnc/view?usp=sharing)
Before committing to recording these, I really need some external feedback (only on the songwriting) that'll help me know the flaws and improve upon my songwriting in general. I apologize in advance if guitar pro audio outputs aren't allowed, or if this subforum isn't the right one to post feedback threads.
I'd appreciate some honest feedback, especially about those parts which don't sound good. Of course, it would be good to hear what parts sound good according to you as well, and this way I can form an idea of what I did wrong/right.
https://soundcloud.com/kulhari_shirish/sets/outset_2016
(And just in case, here are the gp tabs: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-2nHF8a0j3XNXB6Ry1ZSXNVNnc/view?usp=sharing)
