Gonna start doin a staight forward death metal band.... criticism please

[widdlywhaa]

mostly on the actual tone of the recording but I plan on using the riff too....

I haven't played any REAL Death metal stuff in a while and I kinda wanna do something in the vein of Bolt Thrower or Suffo... really minimalist and kinda down tempo......

whatya think?


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[Stealthdjentstic]

Love it, maybe a little less trebel and mids and a little moar bass.

 

[widdlywhaa]

LOL yeah it's a little lacking in the lows cause there's no actual bass track... I don't have one to record with at the moment.....

What I was goin for was kinda like Bolt Thrower-esque riffs with Modern CC tone

I absolutely love Cannibal Corpse's tone in general!

but I can't afford a recto let alone one of those EVM12l Black Label loaded cabs!

(wishes he had bought TMM's 2x12 when he had the chance )

 

[Xiphos68]

I like it.
Tone is good. But take advice from the others to make it sound better.

 

[groph]

Doesn't seem to fit with the drums all that well, the rhythm of the riff not the tone.

When you're not palm muting you're definitely getting a Cannibal Corpse esque tone for sure.

The tone strikes me as a bit harsh on the palm mutes but it's pretty killer with the tremolo picked parts.

EDIT: Yeah, less mid and treble would be good I think.

 

[jjjsssxxx]

I think it sounds pretty cool. Kinda Gateways era Morbid Angel-ish.

 

[Origin]

Very Bolt Thrower. Which to me means automatically good hahaha. Would love to hear more

 

[widdlywhaa]

Hows abouts this versions?

OOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHH YYYYYEEEEEAAAAAHHHH!


trimmed the highs a little more and added some different impulses to beef it up in absence of bass

 

[MF_Kitten]

it sounds good, but the guitars need to be tighter with the drums. also, turn the drums up a bit (or the guitars down) so they act together.

i would speed the song up a little, to get a nice flow going.

 

[Antenna]

MF Kittens right about the tight playing other than that i think that shits rocking man keep it up.