How's my mix?

[BillMurray]

Hi there, I also attempted a little mastering on this track.
This is my first proper attempt although the track is just a rough song as I didn't have much time for writing. I think the bass might be a little load.

https://soundcloud.com/billmurray-4/rough-test-track-louder-mix

Any comments & criticism are welcome.

Thanks.

Bill.

Gear:
Pod HD (Desktop)
Gibson Epiphone
SSD4
Waves Plugins
Ozone 5

 

[BillMurray]

Here is a slightly better/louder mix: https://soundcloud.com/billmurray-4/rough-test-track-louder-mix

 

[Eryalus]

Sounds good to me!

Of course, I'm no audio guru

 

[BillMurray]

Sounds good to me!

Of course, I'm no audio guru

Cheers!