I made this in under an hour, distracted, and I actually think it's pretty good!

[aturaya]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/45084039/Babies.mp3

Kind of cool for a product of copy + paste I guess.

Comment?

 

[ManuelB]

Overall a really good sounding thingy for under an hour... but: Bassdrum!!! WTF Sounds like a sewing machine to me in some way. Try to get it more natural sounding and with lesser characters... Sounds like you wanted too much in some parts dude

 

[manana]

kick drum needs more bass but I can feel the death sound you are going for. Good job! Kick drum is too clicky maybe add a little 3khz and 100hz and a lot of 60-70hz