Messing with the Wounds breakdown pattern (Veil of Maya)

[musikizlife]

Here i just created this quick little song just so i could mess around with the chug oattern used in the song Wounds off of the album The Common Man's Collapse. Hope you enjoy.

All criticisms accepted, especially mix tips, this one was done fairly quick and didnt spend much time on the mix so be gentle!

Song For Kicks Master (Messing with Wounds rhythm) by Musikizlife on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

(BTW In no way am i taking credit for that riff, the one that begins at about 22 secs, its all Marc Okubo's, mad props to him for being such a sick guitarist!)

 

[musikizlife]

anyone??

 

[S-O]

OHs are a bit loud, kick is a bit quiet, lacks some body, but that may just be because it's buried. Snare could be a bit fatter, bit more splatty. Guitars are a bit quiet, is there a bass track?

Guitars sound good tone wise, perhaps a bit fuzzy at parts, but a bit dull during the breakdown palm muted section.

Work on balancing, that will help this mix a lot!