Monster Hunter Online - Velkhana

[SomeChump]

I got some inspiration to do something with this track from another user of SS. I think it sounds dope, but I'd like any crit you can give me.
https://soundcloud.com/bobbymarshallslammers/velkhana-w-stainless-steel

 

[Lukhas]

I got some inspiration to do something with this track from another user of SS. I think it sounds dope, but I'd like any crit you can give me.
https://soundcloud.com/bobbymarshallslammers/velkhana-w-stainless-steel

It feels like the guitars, bass and drums sit on top of the mix instead of inside the mix. I'd say why not; I'd also say that you could experiment with how you spatially locate each instrument: how you pan them and how close or far in the background the instruments are.