Nice work dude , good playing and writing , good mix sound , nice experimental vibe ! Much better than most "what does my mix need" posts .
The only thing i would recommend is getting the plugin Ozone 5 , bounce your entire mix down to 1 track and insert ozone 5 mastering plugin , and checkout some presets . I like "CD Master" preset as a one size fits all setting . It will make your mix louder on whole , and squish it together a bit more ! Great track !
ha! I swear, I was thinking as I was listening to the song the first time after reading the posts... what if he IS using Ozone lol. Honest. How funny
Have you put together a BandCamp or something similar? Like to hear more of your music and I always donate something if I can download it.
Thanks
Listened some more. I don't know enough to tell you what to try etc. but the volume is kind of quiet on SoundCloud? If I crank my powered monitors to 11 it is just about where it should be at about half volume on my system. Also would like to turn up the bass drum and the snare maybe down a bit but with a bit more "crack" to it, its slightly "soft" but that may be just the volume issue I seem to be having when playing it on my computer/monitors? Anyways, not being critical, LOVE THE MUSIC. It is just too quiet in general and I only mean that in a "speaker volume" sense.
Ahaha HALO I composed and played all the parts of this song .. currently my only actual band is a cover-band of Megadeth, Metallica and Iron Maiden! ahahahaha \m/ just for fun and kick some ass in my sad country