My 'Progressive' Compositions. Need Opinions!

[Bugrasisman]

I just began to compose some progressive guitar music and I need opinions about form, riffing and other stuff. I know my tone sucks. i just ordered my custom amp so tone issue will be ended soon for me.

Here they are my 2 progressive demo. All constructive comments are welcome!

Iced Caffeine - Bugra Sisman - YouTube

ProgressiveLove - Bugra Sisman - YouTube

 

[DavidMW]

Good Work! I got a very dream theater-y vibe from Progressive Love...

Impressive chops and feel

 

[Bugrasisman]

Thanks mate! Glad you like it. You are totally right about "DT influence"

 

[Bugrasisman]

Bump

 

[Chris Finster]

I can see what you're intending to get across. The playing seems to fall flat on my ears though. Needs some fire behind it. More fire/bawls. Play the fucker like you mean it.

Having said that i do like the riffs. I just think you need to beat your axe a lil harder.

 

[Bugrasisman]

I just think you need to beat your axe a lil harder.

Cheers man! Is it maybe because of my crap tone? and I shared 2 tracks, what was your comment for?

 

[Chris Finster]

I just listened to the first one. But i can tell that with the way youre attacking your guitar with your right hand has alot to do with your "crap tone"

Ever heard people say you can put the same guitar in 5 different peoples hands, and somehow hear 5 different guitars?

Listen...at any rate keep working at it, youve obviously got the passion to do it, and thats 90% of it imo.

 

[Bugrasisman]

Yeah. Thanks again!

 

[Bugrasisman]

I cleaned it up a bit.

Iced Caffeine - Bugra Sisman (Second take) - YouTube