Need Opinions/Help with this mix!

[savanderbok]

I'm mixing and then mastering my bands new song and i want some outside opinions on how it sounds. feel free to suggest anything i could do to make it sound better too!

https://soundcloud.com/spooncer/ok

I want it to sound more full in the master. any suggestions on what i would use to achieve that? i'm using Logic Pro 9.

also, some shameless promotion. if you like what you heard in that clip, please check out my bands facebook. https://www.facebook.com/greedthecreature

 

[savanderbok]

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[BoW]

I'm trying to get back into audio production, meaning its been a while so take everything I say with a grain of salt. Vocals are a bit loud in the mix, and sound like they have been EQed to give them more treble/presence. I'm not really hearing a bass guitar, so if there is one, I'd try to accentuate it more. Overall the track sounds very bright, I'd master it to have more low end in it. Down that same ally, for metal I'd also recommend compressing the whole thing. Those are my 2 cents, but I dig it.

 

[Yo_Wattup]

Vocals are a bit loud, guitars a bit thin and fizzy, bass sounds too boomy and undefined.

 

[savanderbok]

thanks for the input!