New Ambient/Melodic/Metal Thing! Feedback much appreciated :)

[MakewayforMan]

Hey guys, I'd love to hear some feedback on my tune "Vitals". I used SD2.0, my POD X3, Halion for the background strings, a Carvin 5 string bass and my Schecter DS with Duncan Jazz and Invaders. Lemme know whatcha think!

-Lysol
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[Xifter]

Symbols seemed to loud. Liked the music though. Nice job man.

 

[JamesM]

Overheads need to come down, and maybe kick up the slightest bit. Music is really good, but the low guitar gets swallowed up sometimes in the mix.

 

[MakewayforMan]

Yeah, I knew someone would mention the overheads! Haha, I don't know what it is with me and cymbals, but I think you guys are right, they need to come down. I'll experiment with raising the kicks as well. I appreciate the feedback, every little bit helps! Now if I can just find a singer...