New FULL song [Sd2.0, POD Farm, Trilogy and Metal....very metal]

[niffnoff]

So Faraway.. by nathwasyes on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

This is my latest composition, critics please? this isn't the final master, just need to track the vocals and such, let me know what you think though.

 

[steve1]

I like it

I think the drum levels could do with a bit of tweaking, although I can't say in exactly what way because I'm a complete noob.

 

[niffnoff]

It's still in its foetal stages, like I said man this is just where I want people to try and skin me, but yeah I agree with the drums a lil. Cheers man any other crits?

 

[space frog]

Sounds fine. Maybe guitar and bass could use some tweaking, like a lil more volume, but it sounds okay.

Just one thing I'd say: I'd try to work on transitions a bit. Like at 2:40, I would've included a ralentendo or whatever it's called to slow it to the right speed, include some slower tom work just before that lead and it wouldve come in more smoothly. Now it sounds more like 2 different riffs put one after another quite randomly, though they would fit together with proper transition.

Otherwise, sounds good.

 

[niffnoff]

Thanks dude, and yeah I know what you mean, I might re record alot of it tomorrow, never thought of using a Rall haha :')

 

[TheBotquax]

sounds like the kick could do away with some volume, maybe a little less mids, other than that, it just some more typical post production to make it sound great

 

[niffnoff]

Any other suggestions people?

 

[revlover]

Great song ! I think that the drums are a little overpowering. At least through my headphones (Koss PortaPro). And regarding the transition (or lack of it) at 2:40 I actually think that it works as it is but it depends on what feeling you are trying to put across.

keep up the good work mate!

 

[niffnoff]

Cheers dude, i'll crank the drums down a bit
I'm laying down the vocals and mixing it all again soon, so I'll reupload it soon,