New Song (FFO Headbanging and Moshing) input is much welcome

[Sylim]

Here´s a new one I just finished up.

https://soundcloud.com/user-161801174/sylim-last-chance-wip-working-title

The song arrangement is really tough to figure out for this one. It already went through a couple of itterations. Any feedback is much welcome.

 

[_Drizzt_]

Nice. I think that with some vocals added it could be a very nice tune. To be honest I don't really dig that much the guitar's tone, it sounds a little sterile to my hears. Love bass and drums though.

 

[Crundles]

Can't really offer any useful feedback, but I like the song

 

[Bogner]

Here´s a new one I just finished up.

https://soundcloud.com/user-161801174/sylim-last-chance-wip-working-title

The song arrangement is really tough to figure out for this one. It already went through a couple of itterations. Any feedback is much welcome.

I quite liked it. I most enjoyed the riff starting at the 1:02 mark. Cool build in your transitions up to it etc. I think its great. I would be curious as to what you changed along the way and such.

 

[sleewell]

Damn, that's fucking sweet!! I really dig it.

 

[Sylim]

thanks a lot for all the feedback.

Nice. I think that with some vocals added it could be a very nice tune. To be honest I don't really dig that much the guitar's tone, it sounds a little sterile to my hears. Love bass and drums though.

i´m using an AMT P2 preamp pedal into Rosen Digital impulses. in general i like the tone, but i agree, could use a bit more life in it. not sure i´m gonna record the new album with it, though. i´m kind of saving up for a real tube amp.

I quite liked it. I most enjoyed the riff starting at the 1:02 mark. Cool build in your transitions up to it etc. I think its great. I would be curious as to what you changed along the way and such.

originally there was another part that was supposed to be the verse. had to take it out because it slowed down the progression. also i didn´t have the chorus in the beginning at first. it started right at 0:39. the whole first half was basically just a back and forth between different parts and the latter half was basically just an extended mellow chorus going into the heavy chorus. it felt like two different songs being thrown together haphazardly.