KingAenarion
Resident Studio Nerd
So...
Saturated Vocals no Piano by JamesDevlin on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free
First song done in my New fandangled Studio for my band Ex Curia.
This is the 2nd draft of the song. What I'm looking for is comments on the structuring, parts, themes.
What I am not looking for is comments on the mix... this mix is as rough as anal sex without lube. Also please not that most of the parts are rough versions to get ideas. The guitar solos in particular
This is still missing Piano. Our Pianist (who's an absolute freak) was playing some stuff the other day, but only in the first few minutes of the song. So I decided not to add it to this mix... this also allow you to hear better what is going on in the song..
So I really want comments on the song as a whole. Are there any parts that make you go![ugh :ugh: :ugh:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/ugh.gif)
![No No :nono: :nono:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/nono.gif)
Or perhaps![Roll Eyes :rolleyes: :rolleyes:](data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7)
![No No :nono: :nono:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/nono.gif)
![Dead Horse :deadhrse: :deadhrse:](/images/smilies/deadhrse.gif)
Or![lol :lol: :lol:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/laugh.gif)
![Cool :cool: :cool:](data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7)
![Scratch :scratch: :scratch:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/scratchhead.gif)
Or![noplease :noplease: :noplease:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/noplease.gif)
![noplease :noplease: :noplease:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/noplease.gif)
![noplease :noplease: :noplease:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/noplease.gif)
![noplease :noplease: :noplease:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/noplease.gif)
But hopefully more along the lines of![Headbang :hbang: :hbang:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/hbang2.gif)
![Metal :metal: :metal:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/hookem.gif)
![Shred :shred: :shred:](/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/shredder.gif)
![Bowdown :bowdown: :bowdown:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/bowdown.gif)
![Rocker :rocker: :rocker:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/rocker.gif)
![Banana :banana: :banana:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/banana.gif)
![Holyshit :holy: :holy:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/holyshit.gif)
![James :mf666: :mf666:](/images/smilies/Zork-Metal-Smiley.gif)
![wub :wub: :wub:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/wwub.gif)
As a bit of context. This is supposed to be the last song on the album we are writing. It is musically and lyrically a bit of a mish mash of the other songs on the album. Particularly the vocal ending which is vocal lines from multiple songs layered over one another.
I can post up the lyrics for the rest of the album if anyone is interested.
Saturated Vocals no Piano by JamesDevlin on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free
First song done in my New fandangled Studio for my band Ex Curia.
This is the 2nd draft of the song. What I'm looking for is comments on the structuring, parts, themes.
What I am not looking for is comments on the mix... this mix is as rough as anal sex without lube. Also please not that most of the parts are rough versions to get ideas. The guitar solos in particular
This is still missing Piano. Our Pianist (who's an absolute freak) was playing some stuff the other day, but only in the first few minutes of the song. So I decided not to add it to this mix... this also allow you to hear better what is going on in the song..
So I really want comments on the song as a whole. Are there any parts that make you go
![ugh :ugh: :ugh:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/ugh.gif)
![No No :nono: :nono:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/nono.gif)
Or perhaps
![No No :nono: :nono:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/nono.gif)
![Dead Horse :deadhrse: :deadhrse:](/images/smilies/deadhrse.gif)
Or
![lol :lol: :lol:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/laugh.gif)
![Scratch :scratch: :scratch:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/scratchhead.gif)
Or
![noplease :noplease: :noplease:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/noplease.gif)
![noplease :noplease: :noplease:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/noplease.gif)
![noplease :noplease: :noplease:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/noplease.gif)
![noplease :noplease: :noplease:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/noplease.gif)
But hopefully more along the lines of
![Headbang :hbang: :hbang:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/hbang2.gif)
![Metal :metal: :metal:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/hookem.gif)
![Shred :shred: :shred:](/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/shredder.gif)
![Bowdown :bowdown: :bowdown:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/bowdown.gif)
![Rocker :rocker: :rocker:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/rocker.gif)
![Banana :banana: :banana:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/banana.gif)
![Holyshit :holy: :holy:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/holyshit.gif)
![James :mf666: :mf666:](/images/smilies/Zork-Metal-Smiley.gif)
![wub :wub: :wub:](http://www.sevenstring.org/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/wwub.gif)
As a bit of context. This is supposed to be the last song on the album we are writing. It is musically and lyrically a bit of a mish mash of the other songs on the album. Particularly the vocal ending which is vocal lines from multiple songs layered over one another.
I can post up the lyrics for the rest of the album if anyone is interested.