Mix-wise the low-end is EXTREMELY overpowering on my computer speakers. Hard to focus on anything else with the bass being so boomy. Some low-cuts would probably help clean up the sub-bass area pretty nicely. I liked the ending though, nice and calm
yup, what everyone said. The mix would have more loudness potential without the overpowering low end and the lack of mids. Also, the snare is way too loud.
thanks guys, yea it was made on yamaha hs50's without a sub yet, so im still trying to work out the low end its kinda guess and check right now, thanks for the feedback
Also, the snare hits seem kind of muffled or muted, they dont have that sharpness that most typically have. And like everyone else said, reduce the low end, and un-scoop the high mids.
EDIT: It kinda sounds like Pantera... if that's what you were going for, then it's spot on.