NEW Song titled "Sol" (Djent?)

[Customisbetter]

lol now that i have your attention...

i have been working on this for a while and i was wondering if i could get some feedback. any is appreciated.

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Woohoo it worked!

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UPDATED

 

[Cynic]

lol now that i have your attention...

i have been working on this for a while and i was wondering if i could get some feedback. any is appreciated.

*test embed...*

Woohoo it worked!





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Not really djenty at all, but I dig the tune.

 

[Customisbetter]

i was kinda trolling. lol

the last time i posted a tune no one responded. but it seems as though the ones with "djent" in the name get loads of comments.

And thank you!

 

[ChasingTheSun]

I give it a 7 out of 10. But then subtract 1000 for the false advertising...

 

[Konfyouzd]

i was kinda trolling. lol

the last time i posted a tune no one responded. but it seems as though the ones with "djent" in the name get loads of comments.

And thank you!

yea no one comments on my songs either. i thought i just sucked.

EDIT: i like it. i thought you said you weren't good. liar.

 

[Customisbetter]

I give it a 7 out of 10. But then subtract 1000 for the false advertising...

This is for a class project so i hope i get a decent grade.

^Thanks man... and i know! it seems as though people scan the thread starter before even opening up the thread. lol

"ZOMG another bulb/keith/Morten tune!" haha

 

[Radicz0r]

Bring up the drums a bit in the mix dude!

 

[juhosa]

http://www.sevenstring.org/forum/members/radicz0r.htmlRadicz0r has a point there, bring the drums up. But otherwise I liked it alot. Nice sound in the guitar and I liked the breaks.

 

[Customisbetter]

Thanks guys. i boosted the drums a few dB and they are clipping a bit, but i thinks its better. I'm about to turn it in.

the OP has been updated...

 

[DrewsifStalin]

Dude this is like Dad Rock! haha! It's nice though!

 

[Customisbetter]

what the heck is "dad rock"?

and thanks!

 

[DrewsifStalin]

classic rock, sorry