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[EngineOfAries]

I made a song today... Its called "Think". Let me hear what you think of the song. I always enjoy a good critic.


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[BMU]

Nice playing. It's ok, it just all sounds a bit treble-ish. There's too much going on in the high guitar and cymbal ranges that needs to be offset by frequencies at the bass guitar level, very little going on down there.

Also the guitars sound distant, as in far away. When the synth kicks in that's a nice touch but it needs to come way up in the mix, can hardly hear it. And at around 1:20 or so it feels like the riff needs to change, it gets a bit monotonous from there on (that last one is purely subjective.)

 

[EngineOfAries]

thanks for the feed back. And the synth you hear is probably the clean guitar parts i derived the riffage from. I just layered it in there as a texture more of.
heres an version thats may sound better.


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