Paper Heart (Demo) - [Melodic Hardcore]

[ShawnHighways]

https://soundcloud.com/shawnhighways/lifegrip-paper-heart-demo

First time poster here.
I wrote this song about a week ago, recorded everything in my room aside from vocals. Used a Boss GT-10 for the guitars, Slate for drums and a synth bass from Logic for bass. My friend recorded vocals for me really quickly at uni. I'm not much of a vocalist, but I decided to give it a go anyway, haha.
The guitars are pretty thin and the vocals still need a lot of tweaking. Overall, it needs work but I'm pretty happy with the idea anyway.

If you have any tips, advice or other words I'd be stoked to hear on ways to improve! Thank-you.

 

[Mprinsje]

despite the pretty poor recording (sorry but that's my honest opinion), i really like this. has a little bit of a comeback kid vibe to it. love the vocals

 

[ShawnHighways]

Thanks for the honesty man, I'm glad you enjoy it regardless!

 

[Mprinsje]

Thanks for the honesty man, I'm glad you enjoy it regardless!

well, punk isn't about recording things as clean as possible, it's about the attitude and that's certainly there also getting a little bit of a touche amoré vibe here

the more i listen to it the more i like it!