Progfather
Well-Known Member
It sounds pretty killer. It does sound like the left guitar track is slightly louder and overpowers the right track. I also think it needs just a touch more drive.
But the biggest issue is that you're not actually playing the riff correctly. The riff has muted grace notes in the spaces between what you're playing. This guy does a pretty good cover that illustrates what I'm talking about:
Actually, he is playing it wrong as well. Everything from the delayed intro to the picking pattern once the vocals come in (failed to follow the kick pattern).
*End of criticism*
But you are correct about the muted strums. You nailed the tone and the mix (Oh how I wish I had your ear for mixing ), but adding in those muted strums will make the arrangement sound more accurate.