Periphery-Racecar demo, criticisms please!

[risingsun]

Here's the link.

It's my first time doing this. All helpful criticisms are welcome!
I have an LTD H-1007, and I used a Podfarm custom preset on Youtube for my tone. Ignore the drums, I know they're shit. EZDrummer, btw.

Thank you!

 

[Joshua]

I thought it was pretty good. If the bass drum was lowered a bit i think it would sound muuuch better. Other than that, great

 

[Kurkkuviipale]

There's a guitar in the middle channel, take it out and see how it sounds after that.'

E: you want guitars to be hard panned.

 

[Zand3]

damn good start, guitars sound a bit out of tune to me