Rough Demo (Rain) PLEASE CRIT

[Romeomeo]

Haven't recorded for awhile, just banged this out.

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Looking for opinions and advice on the song and the production. Let me know what I can do to improve, yada yada. Thanks

 

[TreWatson]

it feels like everything is in mono. try separating everything out.

 

[leandroab]

Holy god that was sick!

 

[Romeomeo]

it feels like everything is in mono. try separating everything out.

i think that's mostly because of myspace.

Holy god that was sick!

thanks man!

 

[ralphy1976]

this may be because of my laptop / pc, but i can barey hear your vocals (if there are any)

i guess the dirty overall sound was the goal of the song, and it is achieved. the palm muted main section is pretty cool, simple but yet effective.

i am torn about the drum, the crash feel very present, maybe a tad too much?

overall interesting tune and approach. i have always liked voice effect, so kudos for going that way