Struggling to make my own music

[vejichan]

Trying to get back into recording my own music.
This was the last song i wrote and made. I mixed , recorded and produced this song. Made this song during the lockdown when i actually had time to play guitar. Anyway this was my 1st attempt in recording and making music. I dont know any theory and could barely play guitar. Any advise on
- song writing
- composition
-guitar playing

All i did on this song was hit record and play. I just made it all up.
Listen to Paradise Is Lost RD15 by David Cho 2 on #SoundCloud


Thank you for your time

 

[ArtDecade]

Vejichan is back!
T-Minus 5 seconds until he hops onto the pity pot.

 

[jaxadam]

You sure aren’t struggling to make your own threads! Try that approach.

 

[wheresthefbomb]

Band: "Sorry we suck."
Me: "Cool, thanks for the warning, I'm going to go stand outside and pretend to smoke cigarettes for an hour."

 

[CanserDYI]

Dude Veji your song sounds better than literally at least 50% of guitarists. Shut up at this point, please, because it feels like you're fishing for compliments again

Edit: and wait, what are you talking about this is your first attempt at recording and writing music? I've heard at least 4 or 5 of your original songs, wtf?

 

[cindarkness]

Dude Veji your song sounds better than literally at least 50% of guitarists. Shut up at this point, please, because it feels like you're fishing for compliments again.

Some might say, that he is just programmed different than the rest of us.

 

[AwakenTheSkies]

Tune in 432Hz, the songs write themselves!

 

[RevDrucifer]

The bot’s stuck on repeat! We’ve seen this thread about 20x now!

 

[AwakenTheSkies]

Maybe you were recording in 44.1kHz? It can happen.. You have to record in 48kHz, it sounds so much better! Changes the mix entirely and sounds a lot more musical!

 

[gabito]

We should show these threads to people worried about AI.

 

[TedEH]

1st attempt in recording and making music

Soundcloud account has songs posted 11 years ago.

 

[MetalDestroyer]

Soundcloud account has songs posted 11 years ago.

You really think someone would do that? Just go on the internet and lie?

 

[HungryGuitarStudent]

My friend learned to play guitar yesterday and recorded this short track. He needs pointers on his technique and writing. Don't be too harsh.

 

[Matt08642]

"Hey guys, I improvised this song. Also, what strings should I use? What is a pick?"

 

[vejichan]

My friend learned to play guitar yesterday and recorded this short track. He needs pointers on his technique and writing. Don't be too harsh.

is he better than this ?

 

[Mboogie7]

Soundcloud account has songs posted 11 years ago.

/thread.

 

[wheresthefbomb]

My friend learned to play guitar yesterday and recorded this short track. He needs pointers on his technique and writing. Don't be too harsh.

Awful. I can tell your friend doesn't know any music theory and blows his gear budget on family trips to planet hollywoo. I suggest he smoke more weed and listen to electric wizard's dopethrone.