VRITRA (Eastern Progressive Metal) [Looking for feedback]

[Snarkleberry]

Arahan - VRITRA

Just finished up this track, put a lot of work into it. Would love to hear some feedback! I'll also take a look at anything you want to send my way.

Rig -

Agile Interceptor 6 < Scarlett 2i < Reaper < Guitar Rig
Steven Slate Drums Programmed in
Reason 5 used for other instruments

 

[niffnoff]

Link might help bud!

 

[axxessdenied]

A link would help

 

[Snarkleberry]

haha just added it, my bad

 

[axxessdenied]

I'm on a laptop so its difficult to comment on the mix. The song itself sick playing

 

[Snarkleberry]

Thanks man, means a lot.

 

[Subranis]

9/10, would bang.
+1

 

[sawtoothscream]

Sounds way better then most of the bands out there IMO. great job, finish the CD and let me know where can buy it

 

[Snarkleberry]

Thanks guys, we are auditioning for a vocalist today so vocals should be on the track fairly shortly.

Here's our intro track

 

[Faine]

Dude, what chords where you using at 2:13- 2:50. The whole rain storm bit. Those are sweet chords. Good tune man! I liked it a lot.

 

[Snarkleberry]

X--|--X--|--0--|--10--
5--|--10-|--6--|--10--
3--|--9--|--7--|--11--
7--|--12-|--7--|--14--
0--|--9--|--X--|--12--
0--|--0--|--8--|---0--

There ya go dude, it just repeats those four chords. I wanted it to sound unique so I came up with these non traditional chords. It's in drop b by the way.

 

[Faine]

^ thanks man. Theyre pretty cool.

 

[The Buttmonkey]

Kinda reminds me of early Veil of Maya which is cool by me because Veil of Maya is the business.

 

[Snarkleberry]

^ Yep, that is a major influence haha

 

[LichGuitar]

this is honestly one of the most unique things ive heard in a long time. and it has inspired me in so many ways. i say perfect the mastering of this track and it will blow peoples minds. i love it.

 

[Snarkleberry]

Thanks bud Glad you like it

 

[sawtoothscream]

have to comment again, man this song is so sick. anyway you could emial me a copy so I can put it on my i pod?

 

[Dash]

Great song. I would look at your drums though, they sound literally like a standard slate kit. You should try more compression and EQ'ing. The song itself is great so imo it's worth it.

 

[Snarkleberry]

have to comment again, man this song is so sick. anyway you could emial me a copy so I can put it on my i pod?

Sure man, what's your email? This version still needs vocals and to be mastered as these guys have said, which will be out in about a week if you want to wait for that.

Great song. I would look at your drums though, they sound literally like a standard slate kit. You should try more compression and EQ'ing. The song itself is great so imo it's worth it.

I totally agree, I just don't have much experience eq'ing drums or compression in general for that matter. I'll see what I can do.