Augury
f*ckin bow down!
Hi ppl,
I have been playing guitar for 1,5yrs and I started to write songs. I founded a Deathcore band with my best friends. Well, we have actually no idea if we stay in Deathcore or move to Death Metal or Progressive Death Metal or whatever. For now we are making deathcore.
We wanted to achieve something different than Chelsea Grin, Carnifex, AOAA and other 'generic' deathcore bands. Our idea was many solos, groovy Veil of Maya-like breakdowns, no pig squeals and some influences from other genres (Jazz, Prog Rock etc.). For some reasons we didn't - not enough musical theory, not enough skill in our hands etc., so we decided to make some generic Deathcore shit for the beginning.
I just written the first song that is longer that 80 seconds (xD). Now I need your help. I need some tips how I can improve the song. Feel free to tell me what you didn't liked (or maybe liked too![Big Grin :D :D](data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7)
). Thanks!
Download link (GP5 tab):
endless agony.gp5
P.S. I'm new to SS.org so don't kill me if I placed the topic in bad forum![Frown :( :(](data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7)
I have been playing guitar for 1,5yrs and I started to write songs. I founded a Deathcore band with my best friends. Well, we have actually no idea if we stay in Deathcore or move to Death Metal or Progressive Death Metal or whatever. For now we are making deathcore.
We wanted to achieve something different than Chelsea Grin, Carnifex, AOAA and other 'generic' deathcore bands. Our idea was many solos, groovy Veil of Maya-like breakdowns, no pig squeals and some influences from other genres (Jazz, Prog Rock etc.). For some reasons we didn't - not enough musical theory, not enough skill in our hands etc., so we decided to make some generic Deathcore shit for the beginning.
I just written the first song that is longer that 80 seconds (xD). Now I need your help. I need some tips how I can improve the song. Feel free to tell me what you didn't liked (or maybe liked too
Download link (GP5 tab):
endless agony.gp5
P.S. I'm new to SS.org so don't kill me if I placed the topic in bad forum