Could you critique my song?

[dropkickproductiontx]

Hey guys, I posted an unfinished version of this song a few days ago asking for help with mixing. Now, it's finished, and I'm pretty sure I've worked out most of the kinks, but I'm not entirely sure. Could you guys possibly critique me on my mixing, mastering, and playing/songwriting?

Keep in mind I'm only 17 years old, and I use pretty shitty equipment. But I think I have a decent sound...what do you think?

 

[niffnoff]

Your cleans sound sweet, your distorted sounds a lil fuzzy. The only other beef I have is the kick it seems to punch but almost too much turn it down a tad. The bass sits nicely though which I like alot. Sweet tune.

 

[dropkickproductiontx]

Thanks man I'll keep that in mind on the next song I do. My tone definitely needs work I'll agree haha. Guitar rig is not the best program.

 

[C3Aye]

Legion and lecab with some decent impulse responses are definitely worth looking into for guitar tones (with some compression and gating before hand).

 

[Pablo Zuta]

Great song man , is all i have to say .

 

[kamello]

loved the bass, the cleans and the song by itself

there are some pretty sweets leads too
I like it


could you tell me though, what do you do for mastering? Im pretty retarded when it comes to that