Engines of Aries- New Song

[EngineOfAries]

While on my constant search for good tones and realistic drums I made this tune. Let me know what you all hear.

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John S.

 

[EngineOfAries]

This is more of a tone/mix test. what do you all think about the mix. Im looking for a tone/mix that can be the basis of my first album. Im trying to get a good setup so I can record my whole c.d. with a basic rhythm tone and drum tone. Of course ill branch off with the tone but i just need to know i have a good jumping off point. What do you all think? Is this a nice tidy jumping off point or should I keep looking.?. Mainly I want to know if you all can hear every thing and if you think any thing stands out to much. Let me know what you hear.

John S.