Metal riff (Feedback appreciated)

[TheFashel12]

Just a metal riff I came up with .

Sound is below mediocre as it was recorded with a camera mic and the video is sorta out of sync .



Any feedback ?

 

[veshly]

It sounds like you`re starting certain parts quicker and other`s slower.

A little practice with a metronome will even that up in no time!