New Metal Song?

[Omega_Shred]

Happy Thanksgiving everyone! Hope everyone is doing well and safe this holiday!

Here's a song I started working on last week. I had just wrote out the intro segment and I went back and added more riffs last night, let me know what you think! If you like the music make sure for follow me on SoundCloud for more and share the sounds if you would!

New Metal Song : https://soundcloud.com/blaek-espinosa/oki-hara

 

[schwiz]

I was waiting for the drums to fade in and they never did.

 

[Omega_Shred]

Aw man I'm so embarrassed! Haha, I was up reeaaaally late when I posted the original link, many apologies, here is the fixed version! https://soundcloud.com/blaek-espinosa/oki-hara

I deleted the other track but still used the name so the link stayed the same.

 

[guitarfan85]

Can barely hear the drums on either track

 

[Omega_Shred]

Are you using headphones or the computer speakers? I just re-uploaded it and changed the name slightly so the link will be different: https://soundcloud.com/blaek-espinosa/aoki-hara

 

[Omega_Shred]

Again here's the updated track : https://soundcloud.com/blaek-espinosa/aoki-hara

 

[Chokey Chicken]

Some interesting ideas in there. The guitars are a little thin and the drums, while audible, lack overall volume. The Tom's tend to muddy everything up, so some EQ would be ideal.

Other than that, at least one of the first riffs, reminds me of Vildhjarta.

 

[Omega_Shred]

Hey thanks for checking it out! I really appreciate it! And yeah for some reason this mix in particular the toms were out of control, I'm still learning about compression and how to use it, so apologies for the harsh mix, I'll definitely be more mindful on the next mix!

 

[cougarhunter96]

Dude yasssss, I'm listening with my 20 dollar Sony "Studio" headphones and it sounds great! The guitars do sound a bit thin though..