Rocky
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He's playing (mostly) consistently ahead of the beat. He is totally rushing on some of those large sweeps and taps, but it's not anywhere close to as bad as you.
His time more like an even line with blips in it, while your time is really wavy and out of control.
Don't model your time-feel after Tosin. Tosin's time isn't that great.
I'm actually liking your criticism to be honest. Can you watch the other video I posted up and comment on that as well. I am keen on improving myself always.